DIRECTIONS: Choose the sentence in which the modifiers are correctly placed.
Fill in a bubble to see the answer and why.
An elliptical clause such as "If elected to the city council" leaves out its subject and verb, so readers supply them from the subject of the main clause. Only a person can be elected, and only the sentence with "I" as its subject makes the speaker the one elected. In the other versions the subject is the library's hours, "my goal", or the act of extending the hours, none of which can win a council seat.
- A
- The passive makes "the library's weekend hours" the subject, so the sentence says the hours will be elected to the council.
- B
- Attraction trap: "my" points to the speaker, but the subject is "my goal", so the goal seems to be the one elected.
- C
- Dangling clause: the subject is the gerund "extending", and an action cannot be elected to a city council.